I'm writing a resubmission after not being funded. Help me: 1) Read critique summary carefully and objectively

Prompt
I'm writing a resubmission after not being funded. Help me: 1) Read critique summary carefully and objectively
ChatGPTOpenAI
I'm writing a resubmission after not being funded. Help me: 1) Read critique summary carefully and objectively

Of course! Please provide the critique summary you received, and I'll help you analyze it carefully and objectively. This will allow us to identify key areas for improvement in your resubmission.

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GeminiGoogle
I'm writing a resubmission after not being funded. Help me: 1) Read critique summary carefully and objectively

Okay, this is a critical step, and it's where many people stumble. It's tough to receive negative feedback, especially when you've poured so much into a proposal. But viewing this critique as a valuable (and free!) consultation is the mindset you need.

Let's break down how to read your critique summary carefully and objectively.


1. The "Cool Down" Period: Prioritizing Emotional Detachment

This is the MOST important first step. Your brain will likely be in "fight or flight" mode initially.

  • Acknowledge Your Feelings: It's okay to feel disappointed, frustrated, angry, or even a bit defeated. Allow yourself to feel that for a defined period (e.g., an hour, a day). Don't try to suppress it.

  • Initial Skim (No Analysis): Read through the critique once quickly, just to get the general gist. Do not start analyzing or formulating responses. You're just absorbing the raw information.

  • Put It Away: Seriously. Print it out, put it in a drawer, and walk away. Go do something completely unrelated – exercise, watch a movie, spend time with loved ones, work on something else.

  • Set a Return Date: Decide when you'll come back to it (e.g., "I'll tackle this objectively on Monday morning"). Give yourself enough time to fully detach emotionally. You want to approach this with the cold, analytical brain of a scientist/project manager, not the hurt brain of a creator.


2. The Objective Reading: Your "Consultation" Mindset

When you return, imagine you're reading a critique of someone else's proposal. Your goal is to extract every piece of useful information to strengthen the next version.

  • Print It Out & Get Your Tools: Have highlighters (different colors!), pens, and a notebook or a separate document open. Physically interacting with the text helps.

  • Read SYSTEMATICALLY, Section by Section:

  • Overall Impact/Summary Statement: This is usually the most important. What was the overarching reason for not funding? Often, individual critiques feed into this.

  • Specific Criterion Reviews: Go through each review criterion (Significance, Innovation, Approach, Investigators, Environment, etc. – or your specific funder's categories).

  • Individual Reviewer Comments: If provided, read each reviewer's comments separately.

  • Highlight & Annotate Strategically:

  • Green/Blue: Highlight anything positive or a strength identified. Even if it wasn't funded, they saw some good. These are things to retain and emphasize.

  • Yellow/Orange: Highlight areas of concern, weaknesses, or questions. These are things you must address.

  • Red: Highlight anything that seems like a major flaw, a deal-breaker, or a recurring criticism across multiple reviewers.

  • Question Marks (?): Mark anything confusing, vague, or that you genuinely don't understand.

  • **Stars (*):** Mark points where you feel the reviewer misunderstood something you wrote. (Crucial: even if they misunderstood, it's your responsibility to make it clearer in the resubmission).

  • Look for Themes and Consensus:

  • What comes up repeatedly? If two or three reviewers say your "Approach is too ambitious" or "Preliminary data is insufficient," that's a major theme and needs significant attention. These are often the "fatal flaws."

  • Are there conflicting comments? One reviewer loves an aspect, another hates it. Note these. You'll need to decide which feedback to prioritize or how to address both perspectives. Often, the consensus view is the one to follow.

  • Categorize the Feedback (in your notebook/document):

  • Minor Fixes: Typos, unclear phrasing (easy to address).

  • Moderate Changes: Need more detail, a different diagram, minor re-scope (requires effort).

  • Major Revisions: Fundamental flaw in approach, lack of preliminary data, team expertise gaps, over-ambitious scope (requires significant rethinking).

  • Misunderstandings: Reviewer clearly missed a point you made (needs clarification in resubmission, but also consider why they missed it – was your writing unclear?).

  • Strengths: What did they like? (Leverage these).

  • "Disagree but Cannot Change": Some critiques might be based on something you fundamentally believe is correct and cannot or should not change (e.g., your chosen methodology). You'll need a strategy for politely explaining why you're sticking with it.

  • "Critique Matrix" (Highly Recommended): Create a simple table to organize the feedback.


| Reviewer ID (or overall) | Page/Section in Original | Critique Point (exact quote or paraphrase) | Severity (High/Med/Low) | Type (Clarity, Data, Scope, Feasibility, etc.) | Initial Thoughts/Action Idea |
| :----------------------- | :----------------------- | :----------------------------------------- | :------------------------ | :-------------------------------- | :-------------------------- |
| Reviewer A (Overall) | Summary | "Overall impact diminished by... lack of sufficient preliminary data." | High | Data, Feasibility | Need to add more pilot data. How much? |
| Reviewer B | Approach (p.5) | "Aim 2 too ambitious for the proposed timeline." | High | Scope, Feasibility | Can I cut Aim 2 or break it into smaller parts? |
| Reviewer C | Innovation (p.3) | "Novelty is questionable given prior work by X." | Med | Innovation | Need to cite X and clearly delineate my unique contribution. |
| Overall | Budget (p.10) | "Justification for postdoc salary insufficient." | Low | Budget | Add more detail on postdoc roles. |
| Reviewer A | Background (p.2) | "Unclear if the proposed mechanism applies broadly." | Low/Misunderstanding | Clarity | I did state this, but can rephrase to be more explicit. |

3. Maintain the Objective Mindset: A Few Reminders


  • Assume Good Intent: Reviewers volunteer their time and generally want to help improve science/projects. They're not trying to personally attack you.

  • It's About the Proposal, Not You: The critiques are about the document and its content, not your worth as a researcher/project manager.

  • The Reviewers Are Your First Audience: If they didn't understand something, or found a flaw, it means your original proposal wasn't clear enough or strong enough for them. You need to convince them (or people like them) in the resubmission.

  • Embrace the Feedback: This is a fantastic opportunity to make your proposal significantly stronger. Many funded projects are successful resubmissions.

  • No Blaming: Don't blame the reviewers for being "stupid" or "not reading carefully." If they missed it, you need to make it unmissable. If they misunderstood, you need to make it unambiguous.


By meticulously following these steps, you'll transform the often-painful process of receiving critique into a clear, actionable plan for your successful resubmission.

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MistralMistral AI
I'm writing a resubmission after not being funded. Help me: 1) Read critique summary carefully and objectively

I'd be happy to help you with that process. Reading a critique summary carefully and objectively is crucial for improving your resubmission. Here are some steps to guide you:

  • Take a Breath: Before you start, take a moment to prepare yourself emotionally. It's normal to feel disappointed or frustrated, but try to approach the critique with an open mind.

  • Read it Thoroughly:

  • First Pass: Read the summary all the way through to get a general sense of the reviewers' opinions.

  • Second Pass: Read it again, more slowly. Highlight or note the specific points of criticism and suggestions.

  • Identify Key Points: Look for:

  • Specific criticisms and suggestions.

  • Broad or recurring themes in the comments.

  • Any positive aspects or strengths mentioned (these are important to keep!).

  • Categorize the Critiques: Group the comments into categories such as:

  • Issues with the research question or hypothesis.

  • Problems with the methodology or experimental design.

  • Concerns about the analysis or interpretation of results.

  • Critiques of the writing, organization, or clarity.

  • Budget or resource concerns.

  • Assess the Critiques Objectively:

  • Avoid Defensiveness: Try not to dismiss criticisms outright. Instead, consider why the reviewers might have raised these points.

  • Look for Patterns: If multiple reviewers mention the same issue, it's likely something that needs to be addressed.

  • Evaluate the Validity: Consider each point carefully. Are the criticisms valid? Are there misunderstandings that need to be clarified?

  • Plan Your Response:

  • Address Each Point: Make a list of all the criticisms and create a plan for how you will address each one in your resubmission.

  • Prioritize Changes: Focus on the most significant issues first. Minor changes can be addressed later.

  • Clarify and Justify: If you disagree with a critique, be prepared to explain why and provide evidence or justification.

  • Seek Feedback: If possible, share the critique summary with colleagues or mentors. They can provide additional insights and help you see things from a different perspective.

  • Document Your Changes: Keep a record of all the changes you make in response to the critiques. This will be useful when you write your response to reviewers.


Here's a simple template to organize your thoughts:

Critique/SuggestionCategoryValidity (High/Medium/Low)Plan for Addressing
Example critiqueMethodologyHighSpecific action plan

By following these steps, you'll be well on your way to a stronger, more compelling resubmission. Good luck!

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Analysis

This comparison demonstrates the different approaches each AI model takes when responding to the same prompt. Here are the key differences observed:

Response Characteristics

ChatGPT: Provides a direct response with 3 sentences.

Gemini: Provides a direct response with 107 sentences.

Mistral: Provides a direct response with 40 sentences.

Key Takeaways

  • Each model brings unique strengths to this type of query
  • Response styles vary significantly between models
  • Consider your specific use case when choosing between these models

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This comparison was generated using the SNEOS AI Comparison ToolPublished: October 15, 2025 | Models: ChatGPT, Gemini, Mistral